This is for you German-speakers out there.
In my German 3 class (which is another new thing this semester – I forgot to mention it! Last semester it was the same time as orchestra, but this semester I’m free to take it), Frau Hill gave us an assignment: Write a poem (Gedicht) about the theme “Candlelight Dinner.”
Here’s my first German poem ever:
My rough translation (sorry, you can’t hear the alliterations, double meanings, and rhymes this way….):
Light and Music
by Jill Musick
An evening dinner by candlelight
with a night sky above
Mr. Moon shows smiles in his light
we hold our glasses aloft
Stars twinkle
Candles glow
Glasses glitter
Rooms hush
Night
Smiles
Light
A creek flows nearby
with a musical sound
The violinist plays nearby
we hear Bach from the first row
Bachs/creeks flow
Bows stroke
Strings sing
Troubles fade
Sound
Strokes
Silence
I tried reading it in German, and, although it sounded cool, it was a reminder of how little German I actually know. I’m rather impressed at your ability to not only write poetry, but in another language, at that!
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